Legostar Galactica

Damnit! Okay, that's really a mistake I shouldn't be making.

Fixed.

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Okay, corrected all of the mistakes except for this one.



With that one I emphasized the "not" because it's exactly how I wanted it to sound. "This can NOT be good."

Any of the changes made to comics with the new blue outline are uploaded. The ones with the black border have been changed but not yet uploaded as I have plans to make all of the borders blue and am just working out the logistics of uploading all of them, so those errors still appear and hopefully they won't get reported too many times before I finish the revamp.

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D. M. Jeftinija Ph.D.

I've been reading through the archive and I found a typo.

In Comic for November 6th, 2007 the last sentence is:

He prefers tactics which involve trickery an deciet and he is very fond of sneaking up on people, and slashing their throats before they even know he's there. "an deciet" should be "and deceit" ("I" before "E", except after "C"...)

Also, you should probably split that sentence: "...trickery and deceit. He is very..." but that's just style/run-on not really a specific error.

Thanks,
Den.

Comic for July 31st, 2008 second panel "I can only paint the when I'm high..." should that be "paint the future when"?

Thanks, I'll get those corrected soon, but you won't see the changes for a bit.

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Comic for December 28th, 2009

First panel first bubble

"Are you sure it's safe the move him?" should probably be "Are you sure it's safe to move him?"

Fixed.

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Comic for September 21st, 2010

Second panel - "Sickbay's closer than Engineering or the Bridge, so we might as well see what's going on board, then I'll worry about getting power back to critical systems, and getting the comms up." I think "going on board" should probably be either "going on onboard" or "going on on-board" or even "going on on board"

Just to say hi, I am den628 on Star Pirates and came here because of seeing the Legostars fleet there. Almost through the archive

Thanks,
Den.

Comic for October 23rd, 2010

First bubble in the first panel: "We just got a message from Terwin, he's saying that he's gotten some help from the fleet from that friend of his."

Not sure about this one, but should that be "help for the fleet from that friend"? If not, maybe "help from the fleet of that friend"? (Though I expect it is the former with Hogan helping not his fleet).

Done, and welcome, feel free to post elsewhere in the forum, lord knows it could use the traffic.

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