Legostar Galactica

October 30th, 2007.

Tyn says "pompus" where he should say "pompous."



Also, November 8th, 2007.

In the last panel, Barada says "seeing how well those idiots faired." It should be "fared."

And in September 11th, 2007, both panels 2 and 3 say "Darth Nyoance" whereas they should say "Darth Noyance."

Last one: In Marty's wiki article, under "Losing his Hand," it says "Mater Reines" when it should be "Master." I would fix that myself, but I don't really want to mess with the wiki.

Whoops, not the last one. December 31st, 2007, first panel. The Hiro spoof says "... must travel to American" instead of "America."

And another: December 23rd, 2008, first panel: Marty says "conscious" where he should say "conscience."

Once more: December 31st, 2008, fourth panel: Lt. Denobi says "alergy," which should be allergy.

Again: February 5th, 2009, first panel: Shauna says preped instead of prepped.

March 2nd, 2009, 2nd panel: Mister Fithian says quiet as opposed to quite.

I'm on an archive binge.

Excellent, thanks, I'll get to these as soon as I can.

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Saturday, 11/27/10 Star Pirates comic:

"He( )doesrealizeyoudon'thavetoactivlyhavetomine,right?"

http://unabridged.merriam-webster.com/cgi-bin/unabridged?va=activelyWebster's suggests "actively".

Oooh, thanks, I will get to it soon.

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On June 7th, 2005: seperated --> separated
The 2003 typo got fixed but the body was never found. Next, a very similar typo appears in 2005 in the temple of the legendary Una fight. *ominous music!*
Gwarin

Thanks, I really need to get to all these typos. It will be fixed soon.

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on November 27th, in the last panel where Skip Tyler says "hedoesrealizewedonthavetoactivlymineright?" it should be actively, not activly.

Sadly, I created this account merely to point out errors. Woe is me.

http://www.legostargalactica.net/2008/07/01/07012008/
"dieing" should be "dying"

http://www.legostargalactica.net/2008/07/02/07022008/
both instances of "tastey" should be "tasty"

http://www.legostargalactica.net/2008/09/29/09292008/
Nit-pick... last panel should not have a comma.
NOT "They told me, they don't respect me" but
"They told me they don't respect me."

http://www.legostargalactica.net/2008/09/30/09302008/
Several errors on this one.
Should be "Shape up, you worthless piece of scum!"

http://www.legostargalactica.net/2008/12/23/12232008/
Not sure if this one was a typo or done on purpose:
"conscious" and "conscience" aren't the same thing.

http://www.legostargalactica.net/2008/12/30/12302008/
Panel two contains unintelligible gibberish. "Much of system, while improved is obsolete." I can think of several ways to improve this statement, but since I don't know the original intent, can't really fix it.
My best guess: "Much of the system, while improved, is obsolete."

http://www.legostargalactica.net/2008/12/31/12312008/
First panel should end with a period instead of a question mark.

http://www.legostargalactica.net/2009/01/08/01082009/
"tweeked" should be "tweaked"


Ugh. I need to stop now, before I overload the post. Sorry for being such a grammar nazi....

I have no problem with people correcting the spelling and grammar in my comic. I made mistakes, I still make mistakes, I want to fix them. When I have time, I will, and from the looks of it, this batch needs to be done soon. Thank you for registering just to post these, they will help. Everyone who created forum accounts just to correct my grammar is also free the post in other places in this sad and nearly dead forum as well.

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Glad you don't mind the nit-picky-ness. I've actually been a long-time reader of the comic, but lost the link when my computer crashed several years ago, (right before my wedding and moving twice... so recovering lost links was a low priority). Just ran across it again recently, so have been catching up the last couple years of archives.

Here's more errata:

http://www.legostargalactica.net/2009/12/08/12082009/
"lead" should be "led"

http://www.legostargalactica.net/2010/01/31/01312010/
should be "has no effect on them"

http://www.legostargalactica.net/2010/03/29/03292010/
"now a days" should be one word - "nowadays"

http://www.legostargalactica.net/2009/03/02/03022009/
"quiet" should be "quite"

http://www.legostargalactica.net/2010/04/14/04142010/
"with out" should be "without"

http://www.legostargalactica.net/2010/06/21/06212010/
"Apologies"
And yeah, you could have done the captions better.

http://www.legostargalactica.net/2010/06/28/06282010/
"dieing" should be "dying" ... again.

http://www.legostargalactica.net/2010/07/03/07032010/
While both "can not" and "cannot" are legitimate, the usage "cannot" (or "can't") would be better here.

http://www.legostargalactica.net/2010/08/10/08102010/
In the "about the comic" ... "hassle" is the correct spelling.

http://www.legostargalactica.net/2010/11/18/11182010/
I think "I just me the greatest..." should probably be "I just met the greatest..."

And I'm back to the current comic. So no more for now.